Empire State Building
by Alex Azar
This is another story that took me six days to
think of and not much time to actually write.
I was reading up on the building when I came across this little known
fact about it, which shaped the story to come.
I'm most happy with this story because it shows there’s more to me than ‘Anger
Management.’
“Sweetie, did you call the hall yet?” Tricia asks
while slipping on her shoe, supporting herself on the bedpost. Not even looking in Eric’s direction, Tricia
knows from his delay in answering, he hasn’t called.
Making sure his tie is on straight he sees her in
the mirror and, before she can yell at him, Eric explains, “Trish, I have a
surprise, but it needs to wait another week.”
“What does this
surprise have to do with you reserving the hall?”
“The surprise is
the hall.” Knowing this is going to start an argument, Eric turns around and
puts his hands up defensively. “I know.
I know we decided on Excelsior, but I know that’s not what you wanted, right?”
“Right, but…”
“But nothing, we
are going to have a small reception right?
Your parents, and sister, my sister and her husband, my cousin, and some
friends are the only people we’re inviting, right? So, why are we going to rent out a hall your not happy with for
about ten people?”
“So, what? You
don’t want to have a reception? We’re
already not getting married in a church…”
“Hey we both decided we didn’t want to get married
in a church, and this is dealing with that.” Eric is still holding his hands up
defensively waiting for Tricia to become fed up with his secrecy game.
“Wait, are you
trying to change where we get married too?
What happened? We decided on the
conservatory for the ceremony, and you were supposed to be calling the
Excelsior for the reception.”
Wanting to see how
long he can keep pushing Tricia till she’s had too much, Eric nudges a little
further, “I was thinking we change the date also…” Eric pauses, waiting for
Tricia to burst in a furious rage of curses and otherwise harsh words, but
instead she simply stands in front of him, mouth hung open, shoulders slumped low,
and if Eric were to look closely he would have seen her left eye twitching
uncontrollably, however, he’s too impressed with his plan. He doesn’t
notice these things; only that she’s not interrupting him, so he
continues. “I mean, why get married on
the 16th of February? Just
because it’s a Saturday? We chose that
time of year because of Valentine’s Day, but instead of getting married on the
14th you want to settle on something else. First we’re not getting the kind of hall you want because we
can’t afford it, then you have to compromise the conservatory because there’s
another wedding the same day, and now we’re going to change the date you want
to get married because it’s not on a weekend.
I can’t take it anymore. I may
not be able to afford everything you deserve, but I promised you at least the
wedding will be all you’re worth and more.”
With her eye no
longer twitching, Tricia calms down, but is no closer to figuring out what Eric
has planned. “Eric, Sweetie, that’s
romantic, it really is, but it’s already December and we need to get everything
settled soon.”
“I know, honey
trust me I know, and all I’m asking for is another week and a half.”
“But that’s
Christmas time, what’s going to happen then?”
He holds up his
hand extending his index finger, asking Tricia to wait, as he shuffles through
his brief case, on the counter next to the bed. Fishing out the single piece of paper he’s looking for, he hands
it to Tricia, “Here.
Read this.”
Still confused,
Tricia notices the sincerity in his eyes and the tone of his voice. She knows
he’s no longer trying to be secretive and telling her all she wants to know
with this paper. Instantly she sees
that it’s a bad photocopy of another piece of paper he had hand written, she
knows her computer savvy husband must be trying to make a point by hand writing
whatever is said in this letter. She
delays no longer, and reads:
Dear Melanie Maasch,
It has recently
come to my attention that it is possible to have my wedding ceremony performed
at the Empire State Building on February 14th, on Valentine’s
Day. I understand you only choose
several couples for this privilege, all based on a letter sent to you
explaining why they deserve to have their wedding at the most romantic place in
the world. I would love to say that my
fiancé, Tricia, and myself met there, or that I worked there when her and I
met, or that our first date was at the Empire State Building. Although we did have dinner once at Chipotle
within the Empire State Building, but that was long after I had proposed to her
and we were planning on getting married.
She did comment how beautiful the building looked at night as we passed
by one night, and Sleepless in Seattle is one of her favorite movies, but aside
from those minor details we have no strong ties to the building. And I know there may be other couples more
deserving of having their special day at your establishment, but no bride-to-be
is more deserving to have the most romantic wedding imaginable, than my
Tricia. Unfortunately, I’m not a wealthy
man, nor is she a wealthy woman, and we can’t afford the kind of wedding she’s
envisioned since she was a child. And
for this reason, and this reason alone, I implore that you find my wife worthy
of having her special day, to truly be a special day that she will remember for
the rest of her life. Whatever you
choose, I thank you for taking the time to read my letter.
Eric Bertrand
With tears in her
eyes, and her hands shaking immensely Tricia wouldn’t be able to read any more
of the letter, if it were any longer.
She tries several times to say something, anything, but all that comes
out are choked up sobs. Assuming this
is a good reaction, Eric hugs Tricia, holding her tightly against his
chest.
Wiping the tears
from her eyes, and those that trailed down her cheeks, Tricia looks up at Eric,
finally able to speak whole words, “We should tell my parents we won’t be
making it to dinner tonight.” and places a deep, long passionate kiss on Eric’s
lips. Whether they notified her parents
or not, it’s safe to assume they didn’t make it to dinner that night. Having decided to not tell anyone of their
potential wedding plans, until they knew for sure one way or the other, they
had lied to her parents saying that Eric wasn’t feeling well.
The following week
and a half felt like half a year for the couple. With Christmas only two days away, and still no response they
began to fear the worst, until Eric remembered that whether they were chosen or
not, they will receive a response. They
both have trouble sleeping that night, Eric has troubling thoughts of other
couples who have stronger ties to the building receiving the blessing, and
Tricia finding it hard after all the turmoil of her short life, that a
childhood dream of hers could still come to pass. She may never have thought about getting married in the Empire
State Building, but after reading Eric’s letter, no other ceremony will please
her the way this will.
After hours of
uneasy sleep the two wake up in each others’
arms, and want to run to their mailbox, but know the mail won’t arrive for
another two hours. And again these two
hours seem to be the longest moment of their lives. They currently forget that it is Christmas Eve, they are
completely unaware that later that very night they will be having dinner with
her parents and his sister. All they are conscious of is that the mailwoman is already
five minutes late.
Giving up waiting for the mail second by
excruciating second, Eric and Tricia decide to have breakfast then check the
mail. As they turn from the window,
they hear the familiar squeak of rusty hinges and moments later the clank of
metal, which today might as well be the mailwoman trumpeting that their fate
has arrived. The couple runs out the
door and grabs the mail from the box before the mailwoman even takes three
steps. Eric has the mail in his hand
and begins tossing the letters to the floor one by one as he notices they
aren’t from the Empire State Building, or Melanie Maasch, but in traditional
fashion they’re mail is littered with unwanted pictures of other couple’s kids.
Fortunately, halfway through the pile Eric comes across an envelope that’s not
so boxy like the others but instead an elongated business class envelope
adorned with a crude image meant to be the glorious Empire State Building, and
just below the image is the name “Melanie Maasch.” Eric hesitates opening the envelope, and his anxious fiancĂ© not
wanting to wait anymore rips it from his hand and tears the envelope open. She unfolds the letter and with Eric looking
over her shoulder, they read together.
Dear Mr. Eric Bertrand.
……………
Good work Alex, enjoyed. I live in New York and have been to the Empire building!!
ReplyDelete